While I was lying down, a fly came and landed on my face with a buzz sound. There was a banana peel next to me. First I thought it was a fly, but I realised it wasn’t a fly, it was a bee!
I yelled out, “Mum! Dad!”
They came rushing in, and said, “What, what? What’s wrong?”
Mum got some chips to get the bee away. The bee wasn’t buying it. I tried putting some sugar out, but the sweet trick didn’t work.
Mum and dad started to have a loud row, they were arguing about the best option to kill the dangerous bee.
Zoe’s blog a FLY that was a BEE
I liked your writing because I think it has description.
But you forgot to put the word lie instead you put lying.
From CG